Certainly, here's a corrected version of your message:
"I've been to this place twice. First, let me start with the positive - the food is good. However, the overall experience falls short in several aspects. Some of the bartenders are polite, while others could be more humble. If you're a beer lover, you might be disappointed by the limited beer options.
Now, onto the less pleasant part - the attitude of the bouncers at the entry is quite poor. It seems like the management has hired individuals who lack basic etiquette. They speak and behave rudely, almost as if they own the place. It feels as if you need to be a foreigner or a Tamil-speaking person to gain entry, making the whole entry experience one of the worst I've had."